Question:
how to write this down? Please help?
noodles
2010-03-01 07:37:47 UTC
Ok...this is my first time trying to write a movie (i'm just trying) but the part i'm stuck with there's a part where the character is running and doing some stunts on the way but i don't know how to write it down...I can see it in my mind and what the place looks like but i don't know how to write it down...I've tried writing it down but to me it doesn't look right.
Another thing is i know what the characters are saying but i don't know how to write the story down ....Does it have to be in exact detail?...where the place is set.or what it looks like?..I can't really describe it but can anybody help me out?
Three answers:
Bane
2010-03-01 07:53:13 UTC
There are rules and a way to format a Script.

If you dont be specific the end piece could suffer.



Here is a link to writing screenplays etc



http://www.screenwriting.info/



Another good link



http://www.scriptologist.com/Magazine/Formatting/formatting.html
Connorthew
2010-03-01 15:41:49 UTC
1 Watch and learn



It is essential to view as many films as possible, good and bad. The classics are not top of the best-ever lists for nothing, and it is difficult to be original when you don’t know what went before. Working out the structural kink in say Memento or the emotional punch of something like It’s a Wonderful Life cannot fail to inspire your own thought process.



2 Don’t show off



European writers in particular try to make their work look complex and clever. The major skill in screenwriting is making the multifaceted seem simple and accessible. Look at Shrek.



3 Structure



Every script has to have a beginning, middle and an end. Once you remember this you can play with it (see Pulp Fiction, where Tarantino started in the middle, went to the end and then back to the start).



4 The story must have a point



Like it or not, the story has to be about something, with a goal at the end, or it lacks interest (Bertolucci's The Sheltering Sky looked great, but had no real premise). If you can’t describe your story by saying “once upon a time . . .” then maybe there’s no story. A conventional plot will follow someone who has had their status quo interrupted; the drama comes from that person trying to redress the balance.



5 If it’s not 90 minutes then there must be a good reason



Generally speaking, one page of screenplay will take a minute of on-screen time. A movie should be 90 minutes. If your script is over 100 pages there had better be a good reason for it (Ghandi was deserving of three hours; many others are not). Commercially, if you go much above 100 minutes the cinemas will lose one showing a day.



6 Choose your protagonist



Movies should have a protagonist. This can be more than one person (Crash), or even an inanimate object or a place (Fargo). They do not always have to be sympathetic, but they do have to be intriguing.



7 Make an impression



There has to be some suspension of disbelief for a film to work. This is easier for some stories than others but if in doubt, think of Groundhog Day. This was a truly preposterous premise, but logical at every step.



8 Avoid being linear



Movies benefit from having at least two contributory subplots to help vary tone and pace.



9 Be original



These are general guidelines. But you must be true to yourself and your vision. Don’t simply copy others. Good movies stand out because they dare to be different, whether it be the tongue in cheek tone of The Big Lebowski or the reimagining of the Brit gangster flick in Lock Stock and Two Smoking Barrels.



10 You’ve either got it or you haven’t



Talent that is. All the courses and screenwriting gurus in the world will not help you if you don’t have aptitude. There is a knack to writing dialogue that doesn’t feel wooden when spoken. So, happy writing!
?
2010-03-01 16:12:12 UTC
Hello,I don't know much about writing movies,but I do know that u have to create a visual for the reader.And that means u have to use descriptive words,like "jumped","kicked","slammed",etc.You have to create the picture in the reader's mind,make the story pop off the pages so to speak;D If you're describing a stunt sequence,u need to use the verbs and adjectives,the same way as u see it in ur mind.Don't make it too literal,always leave something to the reader's imagination,dont' give it all away.For example,say ur character's name is "Bob".Here's how u would describe what Bob's doing:



Bob



running as fast as he could,leaps over the car in one fell swoop,landing on hard on the pavement...



As for the dialogue of the characters,you have to put what the character says in quote marks,first and foremost.You can write a brief description of where the conversation takes place,not too much detail,remember leave somethin to the reader's imagination.As for the scene description,just basic descriptions will do,don't go into too much detail.Try it this way:





Library Scene:The school Library on second floor has a quiet and cozy atmosphere,there are five students seated at the first table to the left.



Karen:(Enters Library,walks up to front desk)



"Hello,I'm looking for a book on Black History,where canI find it"?





Like I said,I'm not an expert on this subject,I'm pretty much giving u an example of how I would write it,if I were writing a movie.U can also google some tips for this as well.Maybe google "Tips on writing a movie script" Hope this helps u,good luck!!! ;D


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